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"FREESTYLE #4"
  by Young Deeq


Today Ima be positive,
Walk forward and think forward,
Not backwards,
Im just standing here so I can be heard,
Fly up like a bird,
Let the fallen feathers fall,
Spitting like theres no tomorrow,
Killing without sorrow,
No need a soul or a life to borrow,
But the days have past,
The dust and the fire has turned into glass,
I had a chain, but now Its a broken chain,
It hurts to let pain
Go straight to your brain,
Because the chain I had was tight and strong,
But then something went wrong,
And thats the reason Im here writing this song,
I don't want it to be short, I want it to be long,
So stay with me while I get in some thongs!

LOL random freestyle LOL




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Date Submitted: Sep 02, 2008 (09:27 AM)
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  Chainz.
09/23/08 (04:47 AM) 
your gonna walk forwards but not backwards hmmmm sprout yo mothafucking asian wings my nigga lmao buh yayo nice one fa realz idono why im commenting all yur poems iim just bored as fuck plus it be stacking my gs credits haha

  ^.Th3.Gh0ST.^
09/02/08 (09:48 PM) 
I can't really say much about this write..But..Deep in its own ways..And..Has a good flow..10 stars

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