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"FREESTYLE"
  by porkchops


this yo boi porkchops just in case you did not know
i wanted to be sure i told you so
step in to my office son whats your malfunction
your tired as rhymes is ruining our function
you rhymes are more fucked up the the bush administration
how its really done: here is a demonstration
you tied your rag wrong you look like a straight fag
you would been better off wearing a paper bag
i read all your rhymes and they make me woozy and then gag
your rhymes are like you are slow well dude you just lag
i take that back
its just the talent that you lack
correct me if i am wrong but i am right
you was on crack or mentally unstable when you started to write
ok you still inexperienced you got no bullets you a young gun
but i am F.L.A fully loaded artillery son
yes FLA florida but i aint talking bout sunshine state heat
i am talking bout gunshine state heat
i am the king of the streets so yo body lie on the sidewalk
bordered by yellow tape and outlined in chalk
and if this gives you something to lie about
best believe i will silence you when the arsenal come out
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Date Submitted: Sep 21, 2008 (08:20 AM)
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  kinnaird
09/22/08 (11:25 AM) 
heavy! u went in hard on somebody! straight diss. no holdn no punches back or nuthn. get em p.chops! got em!

  Abz Bunny
09/21/08 (08:46 PM) 
lol.. i can dig it u did u r thang

  Stoykes
09/21/08 (09:41 AM) 
I like this........it is pretty harsh but i like it. U sound like your ready for war!!!

  mz_April
09/21/08 (08:22 AM) 
damn this was cold you callin some one out boo? oh tell me who he is lol yea i loved this one fave!

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