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"Freestylin my will emotions of anger"
  by MR.INTUITIVE


People might hate me for this one lol
Dude, you aint ill he cant even utter
I chop down trees like the big giant tree cutter
so you better act like you thirsty and guzzle your spit down
this is my city im the king I wear the crown
yous a joke go put a clown gown,now and act
five punch lines from you and people still aint reacting,to it
This schoolboy is elastic like a plastic bag imma strech you out like pulling a sticky magnum jive
Im hung low like 2*5
Your girl ugly but I still fk that old hag
Magnum shot her then cover her face with a rag
I’ll drop her to pavement just like getting tagged
Then imma stomach her with the 5+5 while you’re looking fag!!
Your verse are unhinge and off beat no strategies implicated
Yous a gimmick you copy you duplicated,you replicate,and imatate
This is a battle of the wits you belong in a close pit
If you spit youll be spitting at yourself
when we get into scuffle, you’s gonna get split, im quick, one flick and you’ll drop and drip
Replicating my method and strut is a deceased mans games,word of advice you better call it quits
leak out my lines crack out from my mind of altered form of vocabulary and expression my verbal lines of fury
I blow out confusing fire so you better fear me,cleary im the guy that will get you buried
Wrap you body in a coil and get you covered two meters deep in the soil
Nice yellow monkey suit you wearing man look like you grew out from the soil
I’ll play with you and fill you head with craps like monopoly lets act like we boys,now
yellow attire are for the apes and you in the planet of the humans this ain’t tropical rain forest alrigh
there aint no shrubs to conceal in so better wear something nice
guns spraying,toe tags, then they’ll put you in the ice
my amunition emptying from the first to last slug wishy-washy through your home linking to you dome, dam this likes a dramatic love poem
I got a glock that will blow two holes in your fking body one in and one out mouth
So 6 feet deep under ground that’s what they call the real dirty south you do the math
You’d still be crying with you head unattached
Three barreled shotty with explosive round,that’s how I get down
I got more straps then a wedding gown
One shot at knee, one to the head ,and one shot while you going down
Im accurate when it comes slaughter a dudes and all type of fools
So if you don’t want to gett eaten you better act right and be cool
Blood all over your clothing like paper machay make you sticky like clue
The word is hear imp nicest asian to come across the blue, sea
And I eat all color of pussy see one of them is from your moma july
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Date Submitted: May 24, 2009 (04:04 PM)
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  mz.lyrikallibl...
10/23/09 (06:27 AM) 
lol well dayum!!!! pop pop u heard that ????? cuz ya boi juss killed this 1 lol

  TINYTEE
08/01/09 (01:57 PM) 
naw diss is very good and i like diss on 10 stars

  lazyme35
07/30/09 (08:35 PM) 
thats whats up i liked this one. it was tight

  malushka
06/30/09 (12:05 PM) 
lol oh shit, lol i feel ye do ya thing papi

  dontnohow
05/24/09 (04:33 PM) 
UM, GOOD JOB? LOL

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