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"Freeverse 1 - Ill & Deadly"
  by Y.D.


freeverse 1..

I'm tired of these niggas holding up
a image that they can't even handle,
always tripping on their words like,
they walking on hot coal with rubber sandals,
knock ya lights out like wind to candles,
and these bitches would talk like they a majesty,
two faced fiends talking shit behind peoples back
like hey! that bitch is fatter than me,
and no this ain't a freestyle its more of a statement,
i'm stacking more cheese than bill gates plate and,
I keep hearing you niggas fishing for comments by sayin you ugly,
well how about I use my fists and give you face plants,
and if so just tell me where, the time and place then,
cuz I'm sick and tired of hearing you faggots complain,
saying you've been through this and that,
when all you've caused was pain,
and don't try to denie it cuz I can see right through ya like windex,
all you really do is stay home and stay outdated and neglect,
I'm so ill and deadly when I'm in the booth,
you silly niggahs could never pass my level,
try and battle me, I'll give you cavities in ya teeth,
Cuz my lyrics are too intense and lethal,
and if you saying I'm only acting, ahaha nigga I've always been like this,
nigga you could call me Evel Knievel,
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Date Submitted: Jul 10, 2009 (11:42 PM)
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  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/12/09 (12:54 PM) 
hmm ok ok i see u got some fire in ya flow. keep pushin that pen. improve. cause there's always room

  TUANE
07/11/09 (03:01 PM) 
Another gud one bruh. Flow in this one is incredible. You got me at" Im tired of niccas holding up an inmage they cant even handle." I see that shit there all the time. Swear they tha harddest thing walking around here and aint shit. Loving it. keep thapen movng. anther 10

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