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"Freewrite"
  by Amayzn


*Brim down*
.
my 816 is my crown.
and yeah I got a throne that is quite a few acres
and alot of folks don\\\'t know I\\\'m working to go major
.
oh well.
so what if this poem doesn\\\'t sell
this one is written from the depths of my heart beats.
I want you to see what I see
.
that is,
there\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s nothing wrong with being opprotunistic
just a crime if you got a chance and you missed it
.
I one time mist it
got big headed when I was called gifted
and when the shit was gone....
.
...damn I missed it
.
Now I\\\'m mystic,
predicting an outcome of perfect jump shots
as my wrists flick it
then flip it
and give it back to the kids
cause they need a role model
and if you ain\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t tryna fix them, then I get hostile
.
cause they ARE the tomorrow
I\\\'m the right now
and if you parents won\\\'t do it,
I\\\'mma hold them down
.
discipline them with a strong message
embrace the time you got as a blessing
and the opposite chromosone
will get you blowing up the phone
but tell \\\'em you got goals
and see who hangs on
.
cause 93% of them won\\\'t give a shit
and 5% is on some other shit
and the last 2%
is bound to get pregnant
.
what are you ready to deal with?
.
.
then if this has begun to make sense
then remember all 100% just wanna make it
and we all tryna find method to the madness
with a lot of hope and a pinch of sadness
and somehow you get through it
but thank your haters like this music
and use it
show the negative even YOU can do it
if you\\\'d stop sucking YOUR own dick to do it
and for now
I\\\'ll hold onto the crown
and when your time comes I\\\'ll pass it down
the way it should\\\'ve been done when I got in
take your time royalty
we all got time to be the king.

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Date Submitted: Oct 19, 2009 (12:15 AM)
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  C,08
11/20/09 (11:21 PM) 
ill Shit crazy nice kid. Deep well focus and raw. 10* easy. rep the 816 hard

  Laydii Lyric
10/19/09 (11:40 AM) 
something must\'ve been on your mind last night real heavy... nice write.

  *Miss Toya*
10/19/09 (10:42 AM) 
very nice...i can tell from a few stanzas that you were on some other ish...:)

  glammm1
10/19/09 (03:49 AM) 
Sweet!!!! Impressive as always!!!

  CUSHIONZ
10/19/09 (03:17 AM) 
nicely done B .......

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