illusive truth stirred into coffee... wow just the type of metaphoric imagery i love... wow.

'tepid coffee' Never heard of that. I like the poem, though. Good job. Daniel

now -this-?!? this was more you, imho. the well-spoken masterpiece. it took me a second cause i thought it was metaphysical til i got to the end...yeah. some of the best-worst conversations start with "how should i say this" "How can i put this" "see, what had happened was" "the truth is..." and so on and so forth. matter of fact...i think this one wants a poem response... my own take on this, of course, but i response nonetheless

How many times have I sat across from a line like this, I like the ending to this, makes me think like damn what's next, annd like this should have been more. This is a lil tug at my pen so when it becomes a pull, I will respond.

whoo ... this spoke volumes ... thats the absolute worst way to start a convo