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"FROM A SON'S EXPRESSION TO A MOTHER'S HEART"
  by Rayna


I see you and I laugh because your funny to me
You hold me and I know this is where I want to be
I cry to you because I know you understand why I cry
And when you leave me I know its not a permanent good bye
That why I never wave but always give a smile
Because to me its like you not gone long but only for a while
I know for a fact that you’ll support me and love me til the end
And even though dad arounds I still believe You’re my Best Friend
Your much more sincere and I know you catch me when I fall
I’m not walking yet but you make sure to wipe my knees after I crawl
You read to me and give all the love and attention I need
You even make sure that my older brother shares his toys with me
You kiss me and shower me with love like no other would ever do
AND
That's why I’m glad your my mom and I say though my eyes
I love you!
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Date Submitted: Sep 18, 2008 (10:00 AM)
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  blaque
10/28/08 (06:43 PM) 
very beautiful write, just want to say its even more heart warming when they get old enough to tell you that your their hero, a childs love is always unconditional...definitely a 10

  --->ROXIE<---
09/23/08 (11:28 PM) 
I cry to you because I know you understand why I cry <---*TEARS* U JUST DONT KNOW HOW MUCH THAT HIT ME......

  Jazzman
09/23/08 (10:26 AM) 
I feel you on this; the love of a your kid is like nothing else in the world. I dont say good bye I just smile; couldnt have said it better chica!! Good job.

  Dawn
09/22/08 (01:05 PM) 
This was beautiful Rayna..very inspiring and emotional..It revived a sensative side of me...keep doing you thang..very nice

  angeleyes1
09/22/08 (08:58 AM) 
very beautiful write so sweet and powerful keep flowing with your words much love diva

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