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"From my finger to my finger tips.."
  by xCLuSiV3BiiSH


From my finger to my finger tips..
clicks the click of redemption
..click click away goes the tension..
drift off to another dimension.
.time freezes..leavin me in suspension.
. i wonder
will life be better for me here..
any cares?
in my own world
do i get the chance to be my own girl?




Wat bad will come outta my absence from reality???
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Date Submitted: Jul 13, 2008 (01:40 AM)
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  D NYCE
07/26/08 (07:37 AM) 
hahahaa! i often struggled to express this particular feeling... you hit it right here nice write babygirl 10 starz ~Mr. Nyce~

  L.edwards
07/26/08 (02:16 AM) 
wow i have felt like this i understand where you coming from

  REALKISSES
07/16/08 (10:17 PM) 
short but creative

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