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"From the Caddie to the house A.K.A"
  by glo
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Back Seat Of Your Caddie by mstwest


My Caddie just not big enough
So let go in the house
Let do it on the floor
so you can really spread my legs out

Let play a game called Hotel
I know it something different
but for every different level
We gone change positions

1st floor-Lips
2nd floor -Tits
3rd floor-Hips
4th floor-Yo Dick

5th- the Suite
let bring in some sweets
for my caramel covered sundae
which you are about to eat

Heat up the caramel
stir it with your tongue
Then taste the overflow of whipped cream
if you thought I was talkin about food, you must of red this wrong

Now it back to me touch you
Before I get on top and start ridin
I'm going to slide my hands on the Indents of your body
Before I let you slide in

This is more than Causel Sex
Way more than the essence of lust
with just a little Romance
This is the karma Suatra of us

So turn off the light
Let have some hotel fun
and see how many level me
and you can cum
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Date Submitted: May 27, 2008 (12:41 AM)
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  DCpoet34
09/03/08 (12:45 AM) 
THIS GAME SOUNDS HOT.I LIKE THE IMAGETRY

  Str8teazer201
07/17/08 (01:58 AM) 
THIS POEM IS A GUD READ

  poetrys poet
06/28/08 (06:29 AM) 
wll my damn what ah hella good collabo on both sides of the mic keep'em cummin

  NICKY BOO
06/28/08 (12:17 AM) 
ooooooooh wheeeeee.. yall madd freaky i see.. this was hot yo.ten starz..

  mzmimi
06/27/08 (09:34 PM) 
damn this was hot, that was a good responsed, talk about hotel , girl you crazy

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