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"FROZEN KISSES"
  by DEBOMILLIONZ


I'm gonna reminisce
About this
A winter day that will always be missed
We Cuddled close together like fingers in a clinched fist
Snow falling from the sky
Both shivering deep down inside
As the frosty air cause tears to fall from our eyes
But were both fine
I dried yours you dried mine
I looked in your eyes and didn't say a word
Quietly numb cuddling out in the snow but our love was heard
Nothing in the world compare what this
Is
Got me wondering what marital bliss is
Cause I have future plan of you becoming the misses
Both shivering can't feel where our lips is
So we quietly granted each other wishes
It was a day filled with frozen kisses

-debomillionz

dedicated to my wife beautifulsoul
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Date Submitted: Oct 10, 2008 (03:39 PM)
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  jerl
12/22/08 (08:49 PM) 
xLiLmama and I agree. We both got grabbed by the title alone. When I started reading this, the flow and emotion just sucked me in and held me all the way through. Another great write to remind me that I missed the boat. Hold on to that beautiful wife.

  Deandriah
12/12/08 (11:18 AM) 
This was so sweet!!! I liked it alot. a 10 no doubt

  that real nell...
12/10/08 (02:49 PM) 
omg ok nowe you killed this one i love it tis so sweet

  K. Jenk
12/10/08 (01:31 PM) 
dats beautiful...check out my poems...it doesnt matter which one you comment on

  Donna Shay
12/08/08 (01:01 PM) 
this is too sweet! another good piece from you. im jealous! LoL!!!

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