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"Frozen tears..."
  by jslim


Stuck in this wool whip cirling around and around
I'm in lifes battleground with no weapons
Feeling like i can't get out make it to the next step
I'm hurt Internal so you can't see it.
I don't complain don't say anything
Sometimes thats a strength but at times it can be a weakness
Am i stuck in a bubble trying to get out
I'm frozen and i need to get these tears off my face
These Frozen tears!!!!
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (01:16 PM)
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  PoeticallyDefi...
11/08/09 (09:30 PM) 
I like how even though this poem is short it is well thought out and has specific intentions. I love the image you create of frozen tears. Good write

  BSavvy
11/08/09 (08:29 PM) 
I know just what you mean but it is true what they say to some degree time heals all wounds, or at least lessen that pain that cripples you from enjoying anything where you can really smile again and your laugh is genuine. Nice write.

  InfinitiFR3AK
11/07/09 (05:45 PM) 
i feel u ,but its gon pass,everytang has a beginin n an end rite so hold ya head up cos ur tears gon stop.xxnice write

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