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"Frustrated Metamorphasis"
  by Laydii Lyric


i cant stop debating on
whether i hate you or not because
due to
recent activities
you have me avoiding you actively
manufacturing
numerous reasons
why i just cant be close to you anymore
more than
the wet lips of a simple kiss
and less than a half a hug
because
you bug the fuck out of me
more that just everyday normal couple disputes or insensitivities

regretting that it doesnt rain
because this pain
shall remain for another day
draining the
life out of me for whatever death is worth
and so i wont say anything to bring more pain
into our home
just
give me my fucking
s p a c e

and please
for the last muthafuckin time

leave me the fuck alone

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Date Submitted: Oct 20, 2009 (06:41 PM)
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  B. Rose
10/28/09 (12:54 AM) 
Wow... you know are tapping into my mental yo... cause this is how I be feeling... a fave for me...

  *Miss Toya*
10/26/09 (03:26 PM) 
l think i should write like 8 of these!!! you def. got that frustration out...love the last line...too bad mofo\'s don\'t know what that means do they!

  Poetry Love
10/22/09 (04:55 PM) 
lmao! somebody is a lil annoyed in this joint and I felt it through every single word. Hot fire.

  Amayzn
10/21/09 (02:28 AM) 
yeash....doesn\'t this sound a bit fucked up....

  vagrom
10/20/09 (10:55 PM) 
said how you feel in no uncertain terms...cant ever go wrong that way

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