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"Fuck *** ! Ass*****!"
  by Blakfiya
  - This Poem is a response to the poem censoring me by harley quinn/a fallen ang...


cuban - Lil Razcal
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at some point
…maybe
…later
...a rainy day in hell...
…when arthritis cripples my fingertips
and my stride has been altered by a replaced hip
and early onset Alzheimer’s makes me forget

…maybe
I will give a fuck
what a mutherfuck
has to say about my fucking
expressions being too fucking [whatever]...

me

cause that’s what I do

me

and I hate the fact that poets,
some of whom I read and/or don't read
feel the need to leave or contain what they believe
because of what fuckers perceive

even if you write about things I don't agree
I am grateful that you contrast my vision
because uniformity is boring to me
I liked to be shocked
freaked
geeked
have interests peaked
and new information to leaf
and through you...

I find the meaning of MY poetry

do not allow ignorance
and gang mentalities
to offset your expressing your reality

I love this site
even though some of its members are fucks
and should maybe get fucked up
cause they act like butts

but[t]

stinks sometimes
but fresh water keeps it clean

know what I mean?

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Date Submitted: Dec 02, 2008 (02:10 PM)
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  mindigoblue
12/08/08 (07:39 PM) 
LOL....well alrighty then! I'm gonna have to second this emotion and stand to clap boisterously while yelling FIYA...FIYA!!! Whoever did now knows not to. I wholly appreciate your expressing yourself here whether some think it's poetic or not is up to them but expressive and emotion evoking it is. Well said.

  Snugasaglove (...
12/07/08 (08:55 PM) 
WHAT THA FUCK?! (lol)----But the word "maybe" was the kicker! roflmao!

  da cipher
12/05/08 (04:15 PM) 
Now you know this is not poetry. I don’t even write poetry, but I know that this isn’t poetry. Fix this up, lady.

  Syndel
12/05/08 (01:22 PM) 
okay glad I read this late cause I am in a better frame of mind now if I had read when you posted I am sure I would be willing to open a can of whop ass wit cha now calmer lets breath the message has been delivered I hope they got what they needed

  MzSpoon is bac...
12/03/08 (09:10 PM) 
You're last few stanzas summed it up perfectly. I think we can be too critical as times, yet there is a sense of freedom on this site. I felt the frustration from this poem, and I've been there too. Don't worry, there's poets with your conviction in the realms out here.

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