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"FUCK LOVE"
  by QueenV


Undeveloped mind,
Lack of experience
Your losing whats good for you
Because of unbalanced adherence

Your unappreciative actions
And lack of resect
Have caused me such pain
In which I regret

I cant believe I have invested my time
My heart, and my soul in you only to find
That all I have done and all of my efforts
To you mean nothing, Its making me sick

We had a commited relationship, lasted three years
And we achived only part of what we were striving for
All you do is take all the credit
Im only human of course im offended

When i put just as much in as you
So what gives you the right to act the way you do?
I cant take this feeling Your putting me down
What happend to your Queen, the one with the platinum crown?

I will never settle for this treatment
you know that
I can deal with this argument bullshit
Ive told u that

It hurts me to my core
This bleeding heart that u bore
I wont take it no more
U can take everything WE'VE worked for

I'll just start from scratch
This heart WILL patch
Ive learned I have to do everything on my own
Fuck a partership...Its less stressful alone
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Date Submitted: Jun 24, 2007 (01:53 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/24/07 (12:21 PM)
Author: Draa
Poem Title: REALationship

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comment icon  COMMENTS (26)
  im luvin me no...
12/27/08 (10:25 AM) 
hell to the yeah girl...you went in on this shit i love it...."all you do is take all the credit im only human of course im offended" damn i feel that right there and you killed the last stanza thats real real talk and i feel the same way girl!!!!ten starz

  Ms Lacey Lania
10/02/07 (04:16 AM) 
YES IT IS!!!!!!! LESS STRESSFUL BEING ALONE!!! I LOVED IT EXCELLENT WRITE, I FEEL THE ANGER AND HURT IN THIS ONE, YOU DID YOUR THANG GIRL KEEP IT UP

  daneeca
06/26/07 (11:05 PM) 
loved it to the '' core'' i feel this way from day to day so i say the same thing too FUCK LOVE ... truly true

  Mijlla
06/26/07 (05:56 PM) 
wow...let them know..im really feeling this wen i went tru the same ish but u live and u learn then u get a new man lol..being single iis good and less stress more fun..good write..10 starrs One Love Empress

  Ms. Hollywood
06/26/07 (02:17 AM) 
that's right its less stressful alone.. overcome cause it will only make you stronger.. you learn a lesson in everything you do.

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