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"Fuck you"
  by Tru'eace


Fuck you…
Now since I got your attention I love you
It’s funny that I have to say fuck you
In order for you to listen to me
Because when I say I love you
I get no response, so FUCK YOU
“The positive”, you never understand
And the negative is so easily understood
But I love you more than words can say
And yet I have to say fuck you everyday
The sweet words like I love you do not have any meaning anymore
The only time we communicate is when I say
Fuck you
SO fuck you, fuck you, fuck you, and fuck you
But in reality I love you
See, what I want to say is,
Can I make love to you?
But I can’t wait to fuck you
I mean make love to you
So I am wondering how you are going to respond
Do you me to fuck you or to make love to you
I love you but Fuck you NO I love you
But sometimes you don’t understand me unless I say Fuck you
I want you but fuck you,
I need you but fuck you
I mean I love you.
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Date Submitted: Dec 08, 2007 (07:17 PM)
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  dkera1
03/05/08 (11:54 AM) 
i love you switched the style up. and to be honest, that is true the sweet words have no effect on the person you say it to. keep em' coming. it would probably be confusing for a person who doesn't understand poetry.

  Moocy
01/20/08 (12:28 AM) 
this poem right here is deep... many people respond to the negative and when you act positive.. they always think something wrong. You nailed it on the head with this one.. I love it completely. Very amazing and amusing 10 stars

  Sun_Kissed
01/07/08 (11:44 PM) 
Im feelin the poem lovin the flow n its all aroind good

  .Candice.Renee...
01/07/08 (11:04 PM) 
ummmmmm nice one... you really caught me with that one... i was thinking it was a hate poem when in all you were exposing how someone can ignore all of the positive words you have to say and only listen to the worst.

  Nikiie
01/01/08 (04:23 AM) 
I love this one. I know what you mean, sometimes negative gets a faster reaction that kindness. I feel what you mean, I like the way you toyed with the notion of love and hate though, good write.

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