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"fuckin' {up} Love (..for my PAMO)"
  by Jamillah


{If it helps}

You can
liken Love to a woman or man
- whatever your flavor -
and just fuck him.. or her.

{It helps if}

you get it on.. just to get it off.. {sometimes}.

{No tongue..}

{No love..}

See mines?
My Love likes to fuck with me.
So I fucks it back.. and forcefully.
I
get a good grip
and choke the shit out of it
till I forget how fucked up trying to love
truly makes me feel.. sometimes.

I call it 'Bitch!'.. and I choke it
till I lose consciousness..
and regain the fuzzy feeling and fluttering
new loves bring;

choke till I'm back to feeling free to freely fall in love again.

I like to love Love longtime..

So I take charge..
and roughride
and take the bumps and bruises in stride.

I take solace in
- and pride -
knowing
.
.
If my Love was a man,
he'd look as fucked up as I am.








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Date Submitted: Oct 15, 2009 (08:16 AM)
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  L33NY LYNN
10/21/09 (06:10 PM) 
Oh yes indeed! I love the message in this piece! Lol I feel you so much!

  after vision
10/19/09 (10:11 PM) 
you are writing like a heavy weight champ beating the breaks off your op-pen-ent -- standing and snapping

  Father
10/19/09 (02:59 AM) 
Very interesting.. First piece I read since my return. I\'ll be looking into your piece since i left. Father\'s Home.. so to speak.

  ~Unpredictable...
10/19/09 (12:31 AM) 
and you doubt your pen... YOU CRAZY!!!!!!!!! I love how modest you can be when we talking on facebook...LOL!!! this was very nice my sis.... very nice....

  piss a mofo of...
10/15/09 (09:43 AM) 
Millah Millah....how are you love? awwww...it would be you who tries to get me to step down from my CEO job @ FUCK LOVE INDUSTRIES....I must admit you have an enticing package to make me jump ship from this company, I must ponder this offer awhile...*cheesin*...thank you for such an endearing and real piece that metaphorically blew my pen up...

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