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"GANG WAR!! STREET VISION!! ) A MUST READ!!"
  by WISDOM21


GANG WAR – STREET VISION

1"I revealed myself to those who did not ask for me;
I was found by those who did not seek me.
To a nation that did not call on my name,
I said, 'Here am I, here am I.
-ISAIAH 65:1

Me and my gang was alone in the rain storm with army fatigue jeans on//
Combat boots and wife beater on//
Early in the morn with knives, chains, metal bars, a battle bout to be form//
Ready for flesh to be torn//
We see our enemies running up the street with black jeans, black trees on// (Timberland)
And white T’s on with spike bats, knives, and chains it’s about to be on//
We running towards them with no fear, we don’t care//
Screaming and hollering wit our weapons raised up in the air//

Our enemies and our gangs crashed together like car collision//
Listen I spit in my enemy face and blurred his vision//
I hit’em in the jaw so hard he dropped in submission//
I kick’em unconscious and started stomping his jaw till his whole teeth was missin// (not kiddin)
And then I heard screams from my homie and my other enemy laughing and grinning//
Cause he driven a knife through my homie chest and then was smitten//
But my other homie was stabbing the killer till he was no longer livin//
Then I was stabbed in the arm, and heard my flesh rippin, blood drippin, my anger rising and I started flippin//
Then I dropped my enemy on the ground where my homie was smitten//
And I slit his throat so he’s no longer livin//

Man it’s still raining, lightning flashin above me, this whole war is ugly//
Because everything around me is bruised, scarred and bloody//
Then I heard sirens went off, everybody pause, dropped their jaws//
And scattered through the street halls//
I ain’t tryin to get caught now so I’m runnin like Randy Moss//
Hearin gunshots bein tossed, love breakin the laws//
I’m smiling in the inside like I was an actor on stage receiving a thunderous applause//
I saw drawings on the walls of a man carrying a cross//
The rain suddenly stop, then I felt a tear drop on my cheek and I cough//
I’m runnin in the middle of nowhere, don’t see my gang nowhere and now I’m lost// (Now I’m lost)

I ran tiredly in the dark park and hid behind the tree ready to feed my soul with weed while my wounded arm still bleeds//
But I was too busy gaspin for air tryin to breathe//
Hopin the cops won’t see me and my gangs won’t leave me//
As I began to rest my chin on my chest, I felt drugged//
I felt something drippin on my head and it was showers of blood//
I heard voices from above//
So I quickly got up to see who it was//
And I saw a man hung on the tree high and above//
He said, “Wisdom I LOVE YOU, I wouldn’t lie to you//
I shed my blood and died for you so I can give life to you//
Accept my offer, repent of your sins and forgive//
I cried out, “The streetz is how I lived cause I was rejected since I was a kid so I can’t forgive!!”//
And the man said, “I was picked on, stripped naked and whipped on, ripped on, kicked on and spit on//
So you can forgive cause my love and blood was already dripped on//
I shouted, “I forgive and accept, I forgive and accept”//
And the man said, “Listen, you’re now a Christian, free from your Street Prison//
So now your mission is to preach in the street and tell them your Street Vision//

Written by Maurice ‘Wisdom’ Bishop
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Date Submitted: Jul 26, 2009 (09:45 PM)
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  dagirl2fly4hat...
11/21/09 (01:56 PM) 
OMG this was hella fire and deep....Imma digging how you just let your words flow...Keep that pen truckin....

  MRSEADDY
07/31/09 (10:45 PM) 
U R TRULY BLESSED BEYOND MEASURE...THERE IS A STRONG POWERFUL PURPOSE ON YOUR LIFE...PLEASE DONT LET HIM DOWN....

  MiSTAKEN101
07/27/09 (10:23 PM) 
I LOVE IT NICE WORK

  Creativity 09
07/27/09 (05:12 PM) 
the intro... all i can say is the intro, beautiful. your very spritual, and for you to be like young its very motivational that you incorporate it into your poems, it takes it to another level. The over all poem is powerful, and sooo real becasue once again noone really gives insight about the stuff like that unless its on the news and really bad. You are a wonderful poet i cant pinpoint my favorite part of the poem so imma fav it and give u a 10.

  Ms. Hollywood
07/27/09 (10:58 AM) 
this was def on point.. .nice edge, touch, and scribe! keep this up!

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