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"get away"
  by jreal



Ever since I met ya I could beat depression
It's like your man don't understand, all he does is stress ya
I can see your state of misery from the introduction
Ain't bout no suckin and touchin, just harmless discussion
Maybe we can see a better way, find a brighter day
Late night phone conversations -- would that be OK?
I don't wanna take up all your time, be the next in line
Tell me your size, let me find you things with you in mind
I can see you're cautious and I'm careful not to scare you
But anticipation of love makin
got you shakin when I'm standin near you
News of precision will prepare ya
In case you get scared, just ask the man in the mirror
Now the picture's getten clearer all he does is hit you hard
I tell you to leave, and you tell me keep my faith in God
I don't understand, I just wanna bring ya home
I wonder should I leave you alone and find a woman of my own
All the homies tell me that you don't deserve it
I contemplate -- but in my heart I know you worth it
Tell me can you get away?


Could it be my destiny to be lonely?
And checkin for these hoochies that be on me cause they phony
But you was different -- I got no need to be suspicious
Cause I can tell -- my life with you would be delicious
The way you lick your lips and shake your hips got me addicted
I'm sittin here hoping that we can find some way to kick it
Even though I got your digits gotta struggle to resist it
Slowly advance and miss my chance not to miss it
You blow me kisses
when he ain't lookin, now your heart's tooken
My only wish is that you change your mind and he get shook
Wanna take you there but you scared to follow, come see tomorrow
Hoping I can take you through the pain and sorrow
Let you know I care -- that someone's there for your struggle
Depend on me, when you have needs or there's trouble
I wanna give you happiness and maybe even more
I told you before, no time to waste we can hook up at the store
Can you get away?


I see you remiscin and I hope you listenin
In the position to pressure and offer competition
Me and you -- was meant to be my destiny, no longer lonely
Cause now it's on for you and me, all I can see
A happy home, that's my fantasy
But my reality is problems with your man and me
What can I do? Don't wanna lose you to the sucker
Cause if he touch ya, I got some drama for that busta
Don't wanna rush ya -- but make your mind up fast
Nobody knows -- on who controls will it last, before I ask
I hope you see that I'm sincere, and even if you
stay with him today I'm still here
I refuse to give up -- cause I believe in what we share
You're livin in prison and what he's givin can't compare
Cause everything I feel for you I wanna let you know
Passion it be yours and I'll never let you go
Tell me can you get away?
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Date Submitted: Sep 11, 2008 (10:48 PM)
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  Shiko
12/06/08 (04:39 PM) 
wow...lucky girl...I love the emotion in this.

  phire fly
11/24/08 (03:46 PM) 
That was nice, real nice. (nuff said)

  MarQuia
11/10/08 (03:47 PM) 
Damn you reeally had me livin dat shitt when i read it..u really do have a way with your words and you express yourself really well..really good job and keep up the great writes aight!!!!

  CC Miller
11/10/08 (11:08 AM) 
The feelings evoked in this peice for me were mixed but mostly what this poem conjured up in me was pity for the voice. (I don't know for sure that it's you the peice is about, so I say the voice) It's a kind of Othello meets Trois meets What's Love Got to Do with It feeling - mixed. Every line rhyming made it even more mixed for me because there's no harmony in the topic. the rhyming seems out of place on page but I think it may be great for a ballad.

  Moey
11/04/08 (01:29 PM) 
that was great from the first word to the last word. i loved it. If i could give you more than 10 stars you would definitely deserve it. great write!

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