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"Get Me Lifted"
  by MEga
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Full Dose by *Pooky*


inhale...exhale...inhale...exhale
Im high already

See its so potent that
All I need is a whiff of it and im thinkin about whippin it
Out

Goin in is like a water slide
Forcin this man to clench my teeth and close my eyes
Bite my lip then, swallow my pride and, moan

I almost let go
Yea baby, this goodness almost got so I gotta slow down and
inhale...exhale...inhale...exhale
im high now

High, off the smell of your sweet temptation
Yet ever so focused I retain concentration
And start the repetition motion, I watch your face while your love muscle

inhales...exhales...inhales...SWALLOWS

Damn im touchin the bottom of it now
Your grabbing at your belly button, reminding me of what my name is
Determination in my face you know what aim is

How could I 4get?
The stroke of this pen through the pages of your notebook
Causes friction that produces an aroma to get a recovered fiend addicted
They just gotta

inhale...exhale...inhale...exhale...
Your high now

So let me bring you down slowly
One wave at a time biting your neck as you hold me
Tightly
Squeezing gently, shivering often, in your ear im whispering softly

inhale...exhale...inhale...exhale...sleep

- M.E.G.A
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Date Submitted: Jul 07, 2008 (04:57 PM)
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  J skillz
07/21/08 (04:28 PM) 
damn, you just put this chick to sleep and i just recorded it, the whole thing and i'm selling sex tapes lol this is a classic great write you should do a soulcast

  *Pooky*
07/08/08 (10:53 PM) 
im lovin it!!! dis da best response on any of my writes yet!!! keep it up boo...10starz and it's a fav. *pooky*

  TyBoogie
07/08/08 (12:09 PM) 
do u kno how fast u would make a chick fall in love by whispering inhale exhale in her ear...woooo

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