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"Get Off My Shit"
  by *JazISweet*


Gathering information with the corner of your
Eye, I despise all the ways that you simply
Try to disguise your silent and pitiful cries

Optomistically I read in hopes of saying something constructive
For whatever reason I thought that was possible is obstructed
For the simple fact that it's what I said evidently switched up & reconstructed

May you have your wish to be way at the top of the poetic food chain
Your actions though speak louder than your words and I hope you maintain

Sympathy you get from me for trying to be who your not
Hate is what shows through in the color of your pen every line that your drop
Images played out in your mind somehow come to life in your plot
Theres no better way to say your jealous while trying to be nice so I'll stop

P.S Try to come up with your own ideas before you start typing!

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Date Submitted: Jun 14, 2007 (02:54 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (13)
  mindbenda
09/18/08 (05:43 PM) 
this was hot mama forreal nice write im feeling your style girl i can believe it took me this long to find you and ur work easy ten starz

  KITTY
09/09/08 (01:44 PM) 
LOVE THE POEM, REAL IT IS.

  mindbenda
07/24/08 (03:36 PM) 
wow this was hot im deff feeling your words good piece very strong like wat u did here easy ten starz

  ASympl3Diamond
07/06/08 (11:44 AM) 
lethal injection!!!!!!!

  --->ROXIE<---
01/14/08 (03:35 AM) 
DAMN JAZ WHO IN THE FUCK PISSED U OFF??? LMAO...I LOVE THIS...A FAV!!!

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