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"Girl... You Tha Reason"
  by TATE89


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This might sound a little crazy
I wanna tell you somethings
Thats been on my mind
Like im written a letter
Sayin im sorry
That i was being a jerk
By not listening to your
Words that you put in this sentence
Of trust

Now girl i cant this shit
I miss you i wanna do good
So thats why this music
Put me in a different-mode
With a code i program
In my head to say
I wont skrew up and i wanna
Stan next to the moon
So we could see tha future
While im e-mail you
Explaning

Im apologize baby
For doing all the things
I did leavin alone at home
All night while im confession
Over Day`26: Since You`ve Been Gone
Damn i just want a chance
To tell you i change
And promise i wont do that shit
Again while im speakin some real-shit

Til my beat stop
Cause it tellin me my song is over
And i pretty much confess alot
Baby
So could we kiss and make up
So we could get back on the love-train
Before this rain starts pooring on us
Cause i dont wanna get sick like Ne-Yo
Sayin Im so sick of love-songs on the radio
I gotta hear since we dont wanna make up

Owwwww
Girl i cant this shit no more
I just wanna have at-least 4-minutes
To tell you i love you and i hope
This poem make alot of since
For the viewers that gonna comment
And rate this
When im still here written away
In my note book
And i remember the last-time
We talked it didnt really work out
It felt that a bullet
Went through the wall
And left a whole for us

To go our separate ways
And just move on

Ya`digg

I feel that we cant
Work this out
I just see we need
Some-time from each other
You understand
What im saying baby
I love you but
We need to be honest
And trustworthy to each other
Feel me;


...Simply Tate


Since Youve Been Gone - Day 26
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Date Submitted: Oct 08, 2008 (02:32 AM)
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  J3LLYB3AN
01/02/09 (01:23 AM) 
this was a nice and honest piece which made it hott i liked the flow of your words and everything keep it up!

  YuNeek
12/24/08 (02:41 AM) 
Sweet!!! Beginning to end I loved. 10 stars

  t-shy
12/10/08 (02:10 PM) 
iLIKES....10 STARZ

  A.Renee
12/08/08 (08:37 PM) 
nice piece.. love the music choice, it matched wit ur jonit perfectly good one

  lady phenomina...
11/28/08 (01:37 AM) 
aww taer tear dam all jokes aside that was so intensly sweet your access would have most definetly been granted good job

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