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"Give me an incompetent fool, and I'll give you AMERICA"
  by bumpy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Generation Y by CandiLovejoy21


Our generation lies in a nest;
This nest contains needles, pipes, guns, brass knuckles and empty marajuana bags.
Brains rotted from overstimulation; tv and computers killing brain cells
Our minds are corrupted with visions of Scarface; the american way, THIS IS IT!
Young men degrading women, young women degrading themselves ; bastard children following close behind
The problem here is that society teaches us nothing but to follow this "golden" American Dream
Of fancy cars, fly clothes and more hoes.
It tells us that its ok to live spread eagle, legs wide and ready for the world to fuck us

Give me and incomeptent fool, and I'll give you America.
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (12:00 AM)
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  chocolaetreat
01/02/09 (02:12 PM) 
I mean you went straight for the kill in this one...I like it because it wasn't all long and drawn out...You made it clear off the top! Nicely written!

  bbeauty
01/02/09 (12:37 PM) 
THERE'S SO MUCH FREEDOM IN SPEAKING THE TRUTH.....AMERICA'S SENSE OF VALUES HAVE GONE DOWN THE DRAIN......MATERIALISTIC WAYS...CAUSE AMERICA TO BE IN THE CRISIS IT'S IN TODAY....NOW WE ARE OWN BY CHINA......CONTINUE TO INK IT OUT....B BLESS

  bootcy baby
01/02/09 (07:32 AM) 
i like this ur poem alot becuz it strue society is so messd up.it wuz a deep str8 forward and honest poem.

  Addicted2Wrdz
01/02/09 (02:03 AM) 
yo i had to favor this piece.. hands down.. [i'm speechless]. 10 stars!

  phatty whatty
11/27/08 (07:21 AM) 
deep write...cuz da world is really messd up like dat

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