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"GIVE ME STRENGTH"
  by RUD3 B!TCH


IT ALL HAPPENED BEFORE MY EYES
THE YOUNG GURL DISREGARDED HIS CIRES
HOLDING THE GUN POINT BLANK TO HIS HEAD
IN A MATTER OF SECONDS HE WAS GOING TO BE DEAD
WHO WAS THIS ENRAGED YOUNG GURL?
WHO WAS SO UPSET WITH THE WORLD
WHO WANTED TO END HER LOVER'S LIFE
BECAUSE INSTEAD OF BEING THE MISTRESS SHE WANTED TO BE THE WIFE
TIRED OF PLAYING GAMES
SHE WANTED THEIR LAST NAMES TO BE THE SAME
BUT HE FORBID
SAYING SHE WAS TOO YOUNG; JUST A KID
TELLING HER SHE WAS JUST ANOTHER HO ON THE SIDELINE
WHICH WAS THE CAUSE FOR HIS TEMPLE TO BE PRESSED AGAINST WITH A NINE
THE GIRL GLANCES IN THE MIRROR AND DOES NOT RECOGNIZE HERSELF
SHE TURNS BACK TO HIM QUICKLY TO INTRODUCE HIM TO DEATH
HE PLAYED HER LIKE A GAME OF CHESS
NOW IT WAS TIME TO PAY FOR HIS MESS
THE GUN GOES OFF AND HIS BRAIN IS EVERYWHERE
SHE IS SO NUMB SO SHE DOESN'T CARE
SHE LOOKS BACK INTO THE GLASS BECAUSE OF THE BLOOD SHE CANNOT SEE
SHE LOOKS DEEP INTO THE EYES OF A KILLER
AND WHAT SHE DID SHE NOW CAN'T BELIEVE
SHE LOOKS DEEPER AND NOTICE THE MURDERER
SHE HAS COME TO BE
BUT...
BUT I AM HER
AND THE MURDERER IS ME
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Date Submitted: Aug 29, 2007 (10:41 AM)
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  Life&Death
09/13/07 (03:40 PM) 
I JUST WANTED TO STOP BYE AND SAY YOU DID A GOOD JOB ON THIS...YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POETRY AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK..YOU DID A GOOD JOB....I LIKE IT ALOT...ALL 10S

  ShawtyV
09/13/07 (03:04 PM) 
wow...those last two lines completely shocked me...i wasn't expecting that! EXCELLENT WRITE!! this was very creative...the flow was great...i mean what more could i truly say about this piece other than you get 10 stars from me :0) *snaps*

  unforgivenange...
09/13/07 (12:45 PM) 
nice write, I can feel the anger and the realization of what she had become at the hands of his horrible game. Playing with a young girls head can definately get you trouble. Thanks for the write awesome job

  J Baby
09/13/07 (10:50 AM) 
Love this right couldn't be better and I see what your talking bout ten stars i hope old dude is aiight ten stars

  joed
09/06/07 (11:22 AM) 
damn gurl

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