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"Giving a reason"
  by LAB **Ms. Cool Whip**


see infinite power in possibilities
under unconditional loves
technicalities
satisfying self seems simpler
than swallowing someones stupidity

I get it...

sentences formulated
with questions hurtful marks

gimme one reason?

maybe,
I didnt get chances
to memorize fingers stroking
through my hair as it
pressed on your chest as I slept

feels as though I cheated myself
to miss that feeling

maybe,
I didnt feel vibrations
of chuckles caused by
tearing laughters outcome

stop, I cant breathe!

or,
possibly,
witnessing
I love you's butterflies
escape from lips
and the effects of its
amazing grazing

am I rambling? You just needed one reason right?

could be cause
i want memories to even
or even
surpass the crass ones
even if they are the last ones...

just one right? just one reason??

honestly, I dunno.


Give Me One Reason to Stay - Tracey Chapman
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Date Submitted: Nov 27, 2008 (11:43 PM)
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  Diemenz
12/04/08 (03:54 PM) 
absolute applause! real work

  DaddysGirl
12/01/08 (08:28 AM) 
it's funny the things you miss when they're gone. the most miniscule, seemingly insignificant things you've give anything to have back... i like this piece. i wish it was as simple as just giving one reason- great song, you did your thing, lady.

  butterscotch
11/29/08 (05:54 PM) 
You have entered my heart in a way that it has not been touched in a long while.. I love the poem and this song makes the perfect compliment to it. I love your spirit and energy... Keep showing your light and my day can not be dark.. Your Biggest Fan, Chris

  *Miss Toya*
11/28/08 (08:52 PM) 
Nice drop here ma

  B. Rose
11/28/08 (02:23 PM) 
This was nicely written with plenty sincerity... I felt that

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