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"giving her space"
  by B3yond R3d3mption


I hoping 1 day we can be together
If not..my heart will remain sever'd
Im so sick in love i just wanna get betta
Ya loves my medicine i cud take 1 dose a day 4ever
I just wish i cud take way ya worry
Girl u my glory we cud write untold stories
N i know that u down for me
I jus wish i cud feel u surrounding me
An i wish i cud change wats in the past
When im mad..ya smile..n i cnt help but laugh
U shud see ur eyes shiny like new glass
The most perfect eyes that cuda god crafted
And u shine under contrast
Ima hold ya down i can put it in a contract
And with my love i can sign that
U like a drug i get high from contact
And it dont make a difference what i wrote
I gotta give u yo space..meanwhile ima hope
This a lover letter not a death note
U make me feel different..das y i love u the most
And i swear ur heart wont be broke
But i gotta love u from a distance..i gotta b ghost
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Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2008 (12:16 AM)
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  urban_priinces...
12/06/08 (01:28 PM) 
Ok.... Why did this make me cry ... THANKS ALOT ! , lol but anyway ... I loved it , obviously ... -Licia

  WarmNillaSuga
12/05/08 (07:08 PM) 
U have some serious talent bruh...and although I hate to read about this situation..I know you gon pull thru D. You have a way with describing your feelings and bringin the reader exactly where you are in the moment....luv'd this write....

  WIZ
12/05/08 (08:13 AM) 
Damn now that's a hot drop dude, The fLow is sick and you just let your heart out so well, it beats to this rite! GOD-BLESS!

  L.edwards
12/04/08 (09:37 PM) 
if its meant you kno it will work out

  DOMINICANPOET
12/04/08 (02:25 AM) 
this definatly is a ten and a fav.... i mean damn this was touching even tho it aint to me i got a sense of relief who knows why i guess cause i see your holdin your head up but this was beautiful ten from me keep em coming

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