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"GO AWAY PRETENDER"
  by renee love


Cant sleep, things flowing & glowing in my mind that shouldn be.
To keep that love so deep is hard to find or define.
Round the world is love that sleeps or slept never kept.
Ppl hate on such a feeling they cant get, into heart can not fit, dem light just lit.

Its hurting, no love, no more flirting just close the curtains.
Hiding behind all fear of it.
I keep holding back to every fact i dont know how to act.
Cold hearted again, no feeling just thrilling to killing.

Im so confused i dont know what to do.
Lord drown me in your blessings to pass this mess.
Give me the strength to the power of the tenth.

No more sleep, tired of tears of rain falling.
pictures in my mind, just ah drawing.
Games which must be played just ah balling.
Cant stop me you just stalling.
been stabbed to much to touch.
You gotta crush for childish ways; no lust.

Anger follows me with myths of a young girl.
Cant keep what she wants. She talk with words that haunts.
He tells me he's all mine, wont leave, just let her stay behind.
I say I try, i try so hard, but she getting to my mind.

No more lies I cant take anymore.
Shut me in, shut my door. Block her out.
She's fake, she pretends, dont let her in.
This aint the begining its just the end. walk with her,
she talks with words that slur.

Dont speak to me in false movements.
Keep talking, well keep it moving.
Just stop what you doing before its a new begining of a new movement
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Date Submitted: Oct 30, 2009 (09:57 AM)
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  Poetic-Politic...
11/02/09 (03:17 PM) 
Very well written..Flow stayed on point, Expression was there and clear..I dig it..

  Eternal Flow
10/30/09 (03:07 PM) 
Who are you talking to in this poem...This was good..the feelings evoked...are real...GO AWAY PRETENDER.....This was flowing no doubt different from the stuff you've written..let me leave it at that....I try so hard, but she getting to my mind...okay...NIce job.

  ghettoholidai9...
10/30/09 (10:22 AM) 
weellll got dam you went had on dis one must be a tru story huh you went stupid for a second i see you

  G.A.
10/30/09 (10:00 AM) 
you've stepped up on this drop big time... its a whole rhythmic flow goin on here... i can honestly say this the best poem you've done so far.. ima have to fave this one

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