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"GODS FIGHTING"
  by THE GOD WAR-CLOUD


Gods.........

Fighting
Descending
Defending territory
Gambling
Creating grotesque revenue
Entertaining for malicious amusement
Empowering cruel intentions
Baiting barbaric brutality
Mastering madness

Befalling into animalistic form
Trained to attack enemies
Misused
Abused
Acting inhumane

..........Becoming Instinctively violent
Killing

Loving destructiveness..........

Cause being Inhumane
Acting
Abusive
Misused
Enemies attack to train
Forms animalism into befalling madness

Mastering brutality
Barbarically baiting
Intentions cruel
Empowering amusement
Malicious for entertainment
Revenue grotesque
Creating gambling territories
Defensively descending

Resembling
Fighting dogs

Dying..............

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Date Submitted: Nov 02, 2009 (11:39 PM)
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  no shit.itsana...
11/04/09 (02:28 PM) 
you definitely outlined the literal while speaking eloquently on the figurative dogs and their tendencies.

  Tonya
11/03/09 (09:58 PM) 
powerful piece and concept...stands true for humans also...maybe thats why you wrote it this was...you a genius poet...cause i took this to several places and it fits

  The Clinician
11/03/09 (01:06 AM) 
You stay with those deep metaphysical concepts. Your words and picture say it all. Enough said.

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