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"Gods Gift To Men.."
  by Jesz
  - This Poem is a response to the poem God's Gift To Women by Just Rod



I am perfection..
I am the epitome of everything you desire in this world
I am intelligent, make my own money..and sexy as hell
I am Gods gift to men

I am the one that you worry about on a day to day
I am the one that never judges ur character
I am the one whose pussy you crave for every other night
I am Gods gift to me

I am the one whos "innocent"
So "innocent" that you dont know wat im doin when i stay out pass our bedtime
So "innocent" that I can tell you anything and you'll believe it
"Innocent" to succumb to ur every need at home but only i know wat goes down in the bed of anotha man
You dont have to know about him..because in ur mind im "innocent" right?
Dont you know I am Gods gift to men?

I am an emotional protector
I tell you only wat you wanna hear to make you feel better..but never wats really goin on
I tell you that ur friends are dogs..
Only so i can have midnight flings with them on the side
But still..Im Gods gift to me

I am weak...
Im an insecure little girl jus looking for someone to control the way i was controlled
Livin my life on the other side of opportunities door cuz im afraid that if i take a chance, i'll fail
I do my thinking with the bass turned to the max because im afraid of wat silence will do to me
I am senseless in not accepting the given
Im not Gods gift to men..Men were Gods gift to me...

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Date Submitted: Nov 15, 2008 (01:17 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/20/08 (09:49 PM)
Author: SECRET_B
Poem Title: God's gift to poetry

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  SECRET_B
11/24/08 (06:19 PM) 
That poem is the shit i wrote a responce to it i understand how you feel and it has a helluva twist to it anyway i read your poems you are a good writer i rated it too so yeah return the favor hit me back-peace

  The Mad Poet
11/22/08 (02:08 PM) 
Straight fiyah...Nice response...I like the way you laid it down in this one Sistah...It's nice to see you give it to us from a woman's perspective....Welcome to the group I will def. be checking out some more of your work...Much love & respect

  Chocolatezeus
11/19/08 (12:28 PM) 
this was an incredible concept. The way you drew the interest in and turned it to the opposite direction at the end. Exceptional

  bxcutie1
11/15/08 (09:30 PM) 
tasia says luvs it

  PoiZen
11/15/08 (08:15 PM) 
God's gift indeed.....nicely done

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