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"Good Evening."
  by .Candice.Renee'.


Teach U a Lesson - Robin Thicke


Within mid stroke
spankings issue stern warnings
'You've been a bad girl"
Flesh flinching from leather tassels
tickling firm brown bottoms
tenderizing meaty mounds
redefining meaning of tapping that ass
tonight
we take it literal...
hips swivel swooning simultaneously
rolling hypnotically
hula hooping
heavens heard as
hooping hollering
hallelujahs
I was to
to refer to you
as God
so may i thank my
Lord & savior for romantic bliss unparalleled
as we sinfully fuck for holy shits
to part from lips quivering?

SHE
responded
"Only on the lord's day..."
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (06:08 PM)
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  Poetrys Erotic...
10/10/08 (03:51 PM) 
I love your style queen. str8 10 on this one. Bravo.

  DaddysGirl
10/07/08 (12:24 PM) 
This was NAUGHTY! I love it ;-) Hott & Sexy write- Great song choice, I haven't heard that track in a while. ~MuchLove~

  B. Rose
10/07/08 (12:44 AM) 
Yo Cat... why was I bout to ask them same question yo... lol... *passes Cat a muffin and dips out*

  H.H. Holloway
10/06/08 (09:30 PM) 
*Hoverboard on overload* DAMN--Bravo--Brilliant--Marvelous--DIRTY--I love it--*Grrrrrr/Fangs protuding--wings sprouting/claws extended* *Sniffs for Candice's scent amidst the moonlit air*

  Sunkissed25
10/06/08 (07:02 PM) 
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was smooth as hell and sexy and brilliant!!! Bravo ma!!

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