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"Good Math"
  by Strive 4Life


In her eyes I see the man I could be-
And in her words, I hear the future i could see-
So vividly- a portrait of we- her plus me-
That’s good math-let just minus a hard path-
But with a woman like u at my side-
I take my pain in stride-
If I said I wasn’t whopped, I lied-
My heart got more scares, then a slave mans hide-
Intimate like the moment in the bible, when Jesus cried-
The day she kiss my tattoo-
That day I know- I had found something true-
U seen straight through my armor-
And blow up my spot like pearl harbor-
Ur cinnamon complexion, u taste like peach cobbler-
The yin to my yang- the counter point of my existence-
The very stars will be our witness-
U receive me perfectly with no resistance-
I am ur’s and u are mine-
Since the beginning of time-
The BIG BANG! had us in mind-
God gimme the strength to fight away her fears-
And the sensitivity to wipe away her tears-
She’s my queen, she has no peers-
I keep my self, so I can give u my all-
I defy gravity, cause I refuse 2 let u fall-
I take the burden of responsibility-
So u can be- what God created u to be-
U plus me- equals we-
And that’s good math- minus a hard path-

Stryve
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Date Submitted: Nov 03, 2009 (03:58 PM)
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Date: 11/03/09 (07:04 PM)
Author: SiSithaflii3st
Poem Title: what is the math

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  angelistic
11/04/09 (12:39 PM) 
wow that is so sweet. i hope your sweetheart appreciates this cuz i can tell it came from a very lovin heart

  hzl-iz-keyz
11/04/09 (11:36 AM) 
This is sooooo nice! If only more men expressed there feelings like you just did! I love it! great ink flow! 1luv...keyz

  K-JiO
11/03/09 (10:32 PM) 
And they said that Einstiens Theory of Relativity was the formula of the Century ... this is real math ... This was a tight write ... very passionate. If we were still rating, I'd give you 10 starz for this one. Nice write ... keep cre8'in

  June-Bug
11/03/09 (10:29 PM) 
siiiiigh...I think I just fell in love. lol j/p that shit was hot luv. I was captivated from the begining, I want to encourage u to keep pushin that pen baby. Whenever u get the time, make sure u check me out

  floatingonthev...
11/03/09 (08:12 PM) 
I really loved this write, I love math.. so that would be the reason I clicked on it, and I am so glad I did.. this line in here.. . wow "My heart got more scares, then a slave mans hide- Intimate like the moment in the bible, when Jesus cried- ".. wow.. that was really insane... I am gonna favorite the poem just for that alone, but I really did love the rest of it too!!! Nice write.

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