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"Goodbye, Apathy (True Story)"
  by 2Smoove


Goodbye, Apathy - One Republic


Diluted thoughts of the future
I thought that I knew her…
It seems like the older we get the more I lose her
never wanted to abuse her…….verbally
but the sweet taste of revenge has taken over me
Luckily the love I have for her is a lil stronger
but I don’t know how long the feeling will last…….
haunted by the past of her decisions
so right now that’s my CURRENT affliction
ELECTRIC CHARGED attempts to save our vision
it takes two… its not a one man mission
cause the words that you say aren’t aligned with your actions
and everything you do is for your satisfaction…
now the value on the word just dropped it means nothin
if LOVE was a stock it would flop and then plummet
so I ignore when you say it
that’s the only way I can numb it
cause I pray for that day when you aint gotta say it
I’ll just know it
one thing I’ve learned is patience
and the words concocted is my ventilation
its only way I can get it outta me
I’m just waitin to say goodbye to apathy


Stephen Pulliam Jr.
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Date Submitted: May 22, 2008 (10:42 AM)
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  Phinest
02/03/09 (12:58 PM) 
u ever thought about writing poetry as a career if u havent u shud cuz u have tru raw talent dat most on dis site dont pocess think about it even if u dont pursue it atleast get a book publish wit ur poems ur words are unbelievable keep writin n pressin foward stay up

  getchamndrite
08/19/08 (04:32 PM) 
"if LOVE was a stock it would flop and then plummet so i ignore when you say it thats the only way i can numb it" very nice...plenty of feeling even when ur talking bout numbness and apathy..deep emotion..keep it up luv

  Nubian
06/27/08 (09:17 PM) 
um luvin dis one.....10 stars......keep it up......pure talent

  RicaKay
06/13/08 (10:58 AM) 
I can FEEL this, it's so real..I love it!

  MizzTeaBaby
06/13/08 (10:50 AM) 
Damn boy!! I can most definitely relate to this epic poem!! Very well played!! keep them comin'!! Ten Starzz all day!! One Love, MTB

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