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"Goodbye"
A cookiehead and "Hollywood" Collaboration


  cookiehead:

boy i never thought i would leave you so fast.

im inlove with another person, im sorry we couldnt last

its hard hurting you, but my heart is somewhere else.

i know your great personality could find you somebody else.

i dont deserve you no way, i was like the flirty type.

but it was only cause of him i couldnt seem to treat you right.

my confession are now told, no longer is there a hold.

on the one i wanna be with, baby i had to let you go.

its ok wipe your tears, im in pain to

even though im leaving, i never meant to hurt you.

these things just happen, and i cant control reality.

i dont know why this situations keep happening.

heartache and pain, thats all i seem to cause.

the beginning is always good, but the end seems to fall.

i would like to be friends, can u find it in your heart.

lover or friends you always said never apart.

  "Hollywood":

I know what you mean Cookiehead, I feel your pain too,
But how do you let go when you don't have someone new?
I just cant take it anymore...I need my space...
I dare not look into his eyes or see the hurt in his face.
He had good intensions....he really is a good guy....
It's just that I'm affectionate...he's not...and therefore I had to say bye.
I'll always love him...no matter the time or day...
But until he can make time for me....I have to go my seperate way.
If it's truly meant to be...this is not a goodbye...but see you later...
To be his wife....nothing more would make me happier.
It's just not fair how life sometimes throws us a curve ball....
To do it all over again and make it right....I'd give my all.
I mean how to we know when it's time to let go....
How you can put so much time and effort into it and it still goes wrong....I just don't know.
I guess Chris Brown was right.......there's not need to question it and ask why....
There's just simply never a right time...to tell the one you love....goodbye.
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Date Submitted: Sep 19, 2007 (08:47 PM)
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  Azon
09/20/07 (02:11 PM) 
Damn this is long..LOL...naw just messing around but you'll did you'll thing on this one for real..youa should keep collboing up u feel me ten up

  alillonely
09/20/07 (02:03 PM) 
yea this a real good look both of yall got some real potental keep it up yall should do another collabo togetha i bet its gone be HOT!!! just like this one is

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