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"Goodbye"
  by big josh


grandma I miss you, i can't say goodbye
I fight everyday to keep the tears in my eyes
I wish you were here graps, I need your guidance
you know my life is hard, but I do good keeping out of violence
this world is so cold, I don't get it
and I tell myself everyday I don't want to be in it
please grandma just tell me what to do
I can't live everyday without saying I love you
grandma I miss you, I can't say goodbye
Imma keep living for you, grandma I'll try
I try to live for me, but my life don't want it
and I know your looking down on my life and your disappointed
cause you knew I would be a good boy
but that was when I was seven
mow I know your up there crying in heaven
I tried to be a good child, I really did
I hope one day I can bless you wit a great grand kid
grandma I miss you, I can't say goodbye
when I heard you were gone my heart died
but I'm fighting the pain, I won't let it survive
cause I can see you in a better place in my eyes
you being gone hit me like an impact
I didn't see you since I was eight, but I blame my father for that
I just want you to know I love ya
I had a bad father, but a great grandma
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Date Submitted: Nov 12, 2008 (04:40 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/16/08 (03:08 PM)
Author: Ghetto-Intellectual
Poem Title: Grandma, Wish I Met You

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  AjaLuv
01/01/09 (11:01 PM) 
IM FEELING THIS SO MUCH. THOSE WHO HAVE LOST CAN RELATE... FOR ME ITS LIKE THAT PAIN WILL NEVER GO AWAY. THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. THERES NOT ENOUGH STARZ TO EXPRESS THE GREATNESS OF THIS PIECE.

  Choosen4him2
12/11/08 (09:24 PM) 
MAN... I really feel your pain! I witnessed my gfrandmother die and it was the hardest year for me...she's been gone almost two now, and I will never regret any moment that I had with my NANNY..but your grandma knows that you are tryin honey and everything will turn out for your good if you just believe.......ONE LOVE

  Burning Champi...
11/21/08 (09:31 AM) 
Your best I have read thus far... your word play was exceptional... and you seem yo own your pain a much more... keep spittin poet...

  babyreecee
11/17/08 (01:22 PM) 
good write

  Ghetto-Intelle...
11/16/08 (03:04 PM) 
This is very deep. You are great with your words and this is from the heart. 10 stars!

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