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"Got you on my mind"
  by young lover


It started out as a crush in progress to so much more, when I seen you were all I can ever ask for, I thought we was gone take it slow but the fillings grew to fast, so im glad were together cause apart I couldnt last, so thankful God gave me somethin better in new, so I left all my pain in the past. Girl I dont know what I would've done if not for you, cause nobody can make me smile the way you do, cause you smile all the time, even when you not still you so fine in all mine. But I dont jus want you for looks and pleasure, I enjoy everything about you, your truly sent from above God put us together. IM deep in like dats a proven fact, but because whats been done in the past im kinda nervous to get any more attached but thats okay cause when im in your arms all the nervousness goes away
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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2008 (07:13 PM)
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  A.Renee
11/24/08 (09:02 PM) 
another beautiful write....good one..mos def a 10

  J Baby
11/24/08 (11:15 AM) 
mii bad i meant ten

  J Baby
11/24/08 (11:15 AM) 
OMG Its so cute and I like it!!!!! I gotta give you five stars cause it was cute and love is mii level

  lil'bitt
11/17/08 (11:19 PM) 
awwwwww =] this is beautiful;;it's ok to be a little afraid but don't let your past keep you from moving on to a better&brighter future;i love this keep your head up k? 10strz =]

  mamas baby
11/17/08 (09:20 PM) 
dont be nervous im just me and i would never hurt you but nice write i likes :)

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