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"Gratification: Defined"
  by THE REALIST POET
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Gratification by Aphrodite


Through your intense gratification, with my mouth saulvating to get to tasting
your sweet juicy nectar, from head to toe as my tongue touches every inch
from the neck up, next up is my well equipped package, hanging at your peek
of a glance, as i stand and in romance, i drop my pants, pacing over your body,
as my hands discover things never known before, licking your walls, and
satisfying your clitoris, your hips, your legs, your thighs, my dick, yes it
exist, this session gots to be it, from my strong hands, gripping your firm ass
tossing it back on this 10" inches,(dats true) no lie, reaching spots in you as
your mind does flips, and your eyes does tricks, and your thighs give it, in that
is, your toes begin to curl, your hair begins to swirl, your hips move to a
rhythm, of my dick like a hand beating on a bongo, tongues touching, belly's
rubbing, cutting, making love and just fucking, in your stomach, feeling your
lunch, screaming baby go further as i give you this one two punch, your clit starts
to swell, and your walls grow tighter, your hands scratch my back as if i got a
itch, deeper i go as i hit the peak of that wall, the gspot of them all, as my balls
rub against them lips and i do dismiss, my strong fluids inside of your body, as
we both let out a groan, two climax at once, GRATIFICATION is the term!

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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2008 (07:20 PM)
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  mz_April
11/05/08 (07:01 PM) 
i really love this write this is hawt. hmm *bad thoughts bad thoughts damnit lol*

  BaBa
11/03/08 (04:15 PM) 
OMG!!! BOO!!! NAW DATS WHAT IM TALKIN ABOUT.. I LIKE A MAN DAT CAN TALK DA TALK N WALK DA WALK... U REAL WIT YA SHIT N DATS A PLUS.. I LOVE DIS POEM DIS SHIT RIGHT HERE IS DA BOMB...

  domonique
11/03/08 (07:08 AM) 
oh my damn kind of at a lost for words but u put the thing down on this piece right here!! my mind on cloud nine thanks to u this morning:D but anyway ten stars

  foremanlin
11/02/08 (05:03 PM) 
very sexy, a true erotic piece, wouldn't change a thing, keep writing

  flawless aja
11/02/08 (04:03 PM) 
Sir...I've read alot of sex poems but this is my all time favorite and not because of the picture but I love the rhyme scheme, I love what you have to say...good write...10 starz

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