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"grayskys (bye love)"
  by 11th Wonduh



spring rains in eden's garden, april blossom earthy floor
creator heard my soul, presented me w/ an exquisite soulflower


emotionally designed to provide emotional satiety
l/ the rib taken from adam, the creator introduced my eve


creator sculpted my heaven w/ indescribable adjectives
intellectual depth w/ beautiful metaphors, a won'duh woman


dehydrated soul, she replenished love's essential nutrients
sensuality, tenderness, unconditional love, past flames are rearviews


l/ tides caressing the sands, soul requested to be swept away
w/ her serene, calming currents & passionately lounge in her vibrant seas


kindred souls, intimately passionate from the jump
sensuously grapevine, hues of caramel & mahogany blended beautifully


in my throws, i serenaded my queen w/ passages from songs of solomon
& meditate, blueprinting a foundation, creation of we


inevitably falling in love, no longer concealing these feelings on the low
in she, i found a lover, a queen & a friend who i lovingly desired


passionately, i kiss her w/ the illumination of the moonlight
w/ the depths of my soul, i unconditionally love you. frame these words, love


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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (12:32 AM)
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  mingmei
12/28/08 (03:50 AM) 
damn...im speechless...its just a great piece of work 10 stars

  bbeauty
12/27/08 (11:28 PM) 
GRAY SKYS ARE NOW BLUE....WITH WORDS THAT ARE AS GRACEFUL AS THE WIND BLOWING ON THIS SUMMER DAY.......CONTIUE TO DO YOUR THING AND WORK YOUR WORDS I'M LOVING IT........B BLESS

  g00n
12/26/08 (02:52 AM) 
Ok you poetically murdered this piece, your words, presentation, imagery, all superb 10 stars without flinching

  Angel
12/25/08 (12:04 AM) 
Such a beautiful thing when one is so fortunate as to find that trinity... queen, lover, and friend... (for me.. king, lover, and friend)... truly one of life's sweetest moments, and few are fortunate enough to experience this... great write... loving the whole feel of this...

  IndiaNicole
12/18/08 (10:22 PM) 
this poem is nonthe less a blessing 2 my soul. the pic goes along great and so does the song. 10starz. i'm really inspired

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