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"Grease my Scalp"
  by ~Unpredictable Nature~


Sitting between your legs

I

let go

as you part away the

drama

fatigue

stress

anger

and

bitterness

now in four section

you slide your fingers of understanding

throughout the pathway of my existence

leaving silky traces of you

for me to smell for endless moments to come..


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Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2008 (02:29 AM)
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  *Miss Toya*
12/09/08 (11:44 PM) 
awww this was so cute...it something about the way a man runs his fingers through your hair that puts you at ease....very nice!!! and i like that picture *i know it's just a drawing but they look cute together so calm and peaceful...

  JuztBe
12/09/08 (04:43 PM) 
excellet ma!!! this was simply beautiful wqy of expressing the sentimental value of greasing someones scalp it was rather short but u included al lthe ingredient to make this one of the best pieces i have read all day this is a fave

  Ms. Sincerious
12/05/08 (01:33 PM) 
the simplist things can bring us the greatest sense of pleasure sometimes.. i love that BG too

  Dimplez
12/04/08 (03:27 PM) 
dang, i agree with B on this, nice vibe man, kinda relaxed me, and i must say that isn't easy2 do right now, yet another great write, never heard anyone describe greasing hair in such a lovely manner lol

  B. Rose
12/04/08 (01:41 PM) 
Quite a realxing vibe i get from this piece yo... nice..

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