LOL@Sidewalkilla!...Cuz even with your explanation, I'm still a bit confused as to all of your metaphorical references in this, for you, socially conscious "scribe."---However, in the 1st stanza, I was with you because the "lost" can't "lose" what they never had...."Nothing from nothing, leaves nothing" just like Billy Preston sang.
This was so damn deep. When I was reading it, first off, this says spoken word all over it. Secondly, you mastered the descriptive metaphors from top to bottom. The lines when you say, "
“Green transformed my nigga
Eating worried my nigga
Equilibrium has failed my nigga
Now he’s a die-hard go-getta!” "....too much of anything is bad..hot write..
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