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"Grippin"
  by YO! Dopegirl


I was supposed to let go of you a long time ago
I know that trying to erase you, replace you
wont work.
Trust me I know, and I've tried
and tried, tried again, tried some more
The door I once left open for you
is slowly closing,
and im opposing to give this another shot
as my heart rots, I still keep believing in you.
No matter what they say, its so hard for me to turn away from you,
love so true is slipping beneath my fingers
I clutch, trying to hang on
wanting to move on
But love just won't let me turn you loose
And as much as I want to cry, let the tears escape from my eyes
I cant let you see me suffer
Even though you could care less that I see you with her
A blur is what we have become
The "maybe's" and the "what if's"
have died with each time they pass through my lips
What more could I possibly do?
Wore my heart on my sleeve for you, you ripped it off
and I'm left naked and open to heartbreak.
Don't dish out what you can't take
because as soon as she betrays you again, you won't win
for all you'll get is my voicemail.
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Date Submitted: May 21, 2008 (11:02 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/02/08 (09:44 AM)
Author: THE REALIST POET
Poem Title: Gripping: Hold On

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  Searchin lyfe
06/20/08 (02:25 PM) 
damn your word play was ill...had me all in it from begin to end ma...keep pushing that pen

  THE REALIST PO...
06/02/08 (09:39 AM) 
dAMN I FEEL THAT SHE WAS SICK AS HELL! WORDPLAY WAS TERRIFIC! 10 STRZ AND A FAV

  A$k Br!
05/29/08 (01:04 PM) 
That was ice cold baby! Loved every bit of it. 10 starz

  KiNg-Go0B3r
05/25/08 (02:23 AM) 
dayuuuumm im feelin the luuv no doubt no doubt ya diiiig this was DOPE FRESH hahah

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