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"Groaning Tedium"
  by alastor



I have experienced the agonizing murmurs of black flies
& have lived during the horrible stench
of our autumn’d modern decay
Each moment brings us closer to melt down
A countdown to the demise
of this migrating stone wasteland
This is a bitter wine to swallow
& yet I am thoroughly drunk
The roads are paved in crimson waves
& the towers are constructed of poor fool bones
Fortified with blood & sweat
“Here are some coins
for your oblivious misfortune”,
sings the cracking whip
Stroke & stroke
& stroke to the beat
of the masters redundant drum
Each day reborn with masochism
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Date Submitted: Sep 09, 2008 (04:28 PM)
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  mindigoblue
09/22/08 (01:57 AM) 
This is outstanding! I see in this piece a history wrought with pain and anguish being relived daily. You have perfectly captured the manner in which lost souls have sold themselves "“Here are some coins for your oblivious misfortune”, readily stepping back into the role of the slave by befuddling themselves with ill perceived gains. You summed this up perfectly depicting how the pain endured is done so willingly. Brilliant!

  RouGeWriTeR
09/15/08 (03:29 PM) 
very physical..cool write.. :)

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