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"GS GONE BROKE"
  by Tuck


BEFORE START THIS POEM I JUS WANNA SAY THIS AIIN'T A DISS POEM JUS A REAL POEM!

MAN,GUESS WHAT I HOP'D ON GS TODAY
JUS WONDERIN THA SITE LIKE ANY NEW DAY
I GET A MESSAGE FROM ONE OF THE FOUNDERS OF GS TALKIN BOUT CREDITS
AND HOW YOU CAN ALSO PAY
LAST WEEK I SEEN SOME STUFF BOUT A HATA PROOF SITE
KNOW MOST OF THESE CATTS IS BROKE CAN'T EVEN PAY THA LIGHT
BUT ANY WAY LIKE ANY DAY I WAS CHECKIN FRONT PAGE
TIL I SEEN SOME SHIT BOUT DONATE TO GS & I WAS OUTTA MY RAGE
I SAID I WOULD GIVE A LITTLE BUT I AIN'T GOT NO POCKET CHANGE
THIS MIGHT COME OUT OF HUMOR BUT SEROUSLY THA ALL YOU GS FANS
NEED TO COME UP OUT YA PANTS AND GIVE GS A HAND,MAN!!!
I SAID MAAN!!! BUT HOLD UP
I DON'T SEE ANY POETS ON HERE WITH GS GOLD UP
IF YA'LL SERVIN A PURPOSE YA'LL SERVIN IT FREE
THEN THEY EVEN GOT SOME POETS TRYNA BE G'S
THAT JUS MADE ME LAUGH CUZ I KNOW A REAL AND A FAKE
I AIN'T GONNA GET STARTED,GIVE YA'LL MYSPACE THUGZ A BREAK
MY BAD FOR GETTIN OFF TOPIC OF THIS POEM
OH YUH WHERE WAS I,OH YUH GS IS GOIN BROKE
BY ANY FACTOR,BY ANY MATTER TO SOME OF YOU THIS MAY NOT MATTER
MAD AT THA OLD TREY SONGZ,
NEVA ACCETPTED {AS STATED} THA REAL TREY SONGZ
THEN DISSIN HIM CUZ HE PUT HIS OWN SELF ON FIXTURE
TRUTH IS HE AIN'T THA ONLY 1 THAT DONE PUT UP A FAKE PICTURE{DAMN!}
CUZ A NIGGA WASNT A FAME,YA'LL ALSO SHOULD BE ASHAMED
THA NIGGAZ WHO GET THA MOST COMMENT,THEY MOSTLY LAME
I SEE THAT COMMENT POLL,I WAS LIKE IS THESE NIGGAZ KIDDIN
A NUMBER FOR EACH LETTER OF A COMMENT WRITTIN
100 LETTERS ATLEAST,EVERYBODY WAS LIKE WOWWWWWWWWW GOOD PIECE
OLD MY BAD FOR GETTIN OFF TOPIC POEM
NOW,WHAT WAS I TALKIN BOUT,OH YUH GS GOIN BROKE
LIKE AC SAID GS DONE CHANGE,
JUS LIKE FURNITURE SOME NIGGAZ CAN BE ARRANGED
WHO CAN THESE NIGGAZ BLAME,NO BODY BUT YA SELF
GS BEEN FUCK'D,NOW THEY WORRIED BOUT ITS HEALTH

SEE ,IMA REAL NIGGA SO IMA TELL IT LIKE IT IS
GS GONE BROKE I WAS LIKE SHITTT
I DON'T CARE IF YA CRACK A SMILE,OR LET DOWN A TEAR
IM THA TRUTH,SO IMA TELL YA SHIT THAT NIGGAZ DON'T WANNA HEAR
YOU & I KNOW WHY GS GONE BROKE
& IF YOU DON'T KNOW YOU PROBALY THA MAIN JOKE
SO WHEN YA REAL SHIT YOU KNOW ITS ME
BESIDES WHERE ELSE IS WE GONE FIND A PLACE TO WRITE GHETTO POETRY
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Date Submitted: Apr 10, 2007 (10:52 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (19)
  TWANGINU
11/09/08 (07:56 PM) 
ok..i feel you.i hope them niggas get that money if they going broke.i wish i could help a nigga.but hard times are very where.nice write.keep doing your thing.

  stricklyfromth...
09/04/08 (09:56 PM) 
Damn!!! is all I can say

  diamondNfudge
08/07/08 (09:31 PM) 
The truth needs to be heard. Its better to keep it real than to not at all. keep doin u. nice...

  Jenesis
08/03/08 (10:32 PM) 
you got a good controversy goin on here...you're saying wats on your mind and bein real...you got a real good point here...i like this site and i want to keep it running...this is one of the many place where we can express our freedom of expression freely

  LaDii_R3aln3ss
06/09/07 (05:15 PM) 
shyd yue kept it real I ain gon lie this Hott too.

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