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"GS in Check: Perspective"
  by Jamillah


I prefer
teetering on
a
t
t
e
r
e
d brinks, frayed
fringes..
a
l
l
i
n
g free..

remembering.. what feels good.. or looks right.. does so just to ME..

Forgetting my own rules.. I realize..
here, there are no "wrongs"... and just writes..

just mine.. and other peoples personal preferences..
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 (02:09 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/09/08 (11:53 AM)
Author: LiquidFire
Poem Title: Box Me

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comment icon  COMMENTS (15)
  B. Rose
09/15/08 (12:14 PM) 
Love the last few lines... there are no wrongs just "writes" I can digg that... very well expressed indeed...

  Soul Lyrikal
08/30/08 (06:35 PM) 
I love this 'write' here...growth should be challenged within the writer/poet to become greater...well expressed piece!

  piss a mofo of...
08/27/08 (11:17 AM) 
to each his own is the way it should be but gs haters always got something to say...this scribe puts those assess in they place!!!

  LiquidFire
08/09/08 (11:06 AM) 
I feel like I commented on this, but I may have just read it twice. Any who, millah mam I'm loving u more and more each time I read u, this should be a staple for the site. Because for me who started writing to just let emotions out I felt in the beginning like I wasn't how do u say that good, n what have you. I felt like everyone around me was soooo much better than I. I struggled for a bit with that then I had to get tunnel vision and just do me, I had ta realize that writing is what's in me a...
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  mindigoblue
08/06/08 (12:50 AM) 
See this is the thing that always struck me with you. You are very creatively unique in the way you present yourr thoughts and feelings. I always come away with a new feeling when iI visit you. This was no different. Very much the inspiration that allows us to be who we are doing so with unfettered thoughts of what anyone else will perceive. There is a quiet joy to this.

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