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"GS PEOPLE WAT IF??"
  by papermoon


Hello GS!!!
Glad you can stop by
Wouldn’t it be rude if I didn’t say hi?
So since this is a reverse poem of what you expect
How about I say with respect, goodbye…haha
You probably thinking, did I read this correctly?
About to leave me a message to correct me!!
Or maybe you would just leave without a reply
Nor rating
Nor comment
Telling others to not read my stuff because its nonsense.

What if??
You asked me to read ya poetry?
And I said maybe..
Because lately..
Ya shits been boring me lately…haha
Oops sorry if that last comment was inserted
But just to be honest I didn’t think ya shit was worth it

What if??
You asked me to do a callabo?
And I said
“Hell no”
Because I have been reading some of ya shit and I didn’t like the flow…
Or maybe I just won’t write you back, because my computers been acting slow
But hell I’m a nice person, so before I leave ima let you know

What if??
You commented my poems and I didn’t comment yours back?
Uh-oh I know you wouldn’t like that
I guess I’m fired..
But I have been on this shit all day, so I got a little tired.
Well I’m done for now, so ima get off this
I just was thinking..
GS WAT IF??


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Date Submitted: Sep 07, 2009 (11:49 PM)
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  Ordained2Chang...
10/01/09 (12:27 PM) 
We all get like this... never seen it all put into words though... and in one piece... you really expressed r GS moments pretty well

  KSMOVE
09/10/09 (04:50 PM) 
lol...dope keep em coming

  kifi
09/10/09 (01:56 AM) 
I like this poem. I just comment everyone that I can. If they don't comment mine then I say, " Oh, well they don't know what they are missing. Wonderful poem with great questions.

  .Mase Da Rula.
09/09/09 (11:52 PM) 
i hear u.... thats just one issue with GS that wont ever be fixed... great write....

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
09/08/09 (12:07 AM) 
So many ifs and truth spoken. Which has me thinking lately about departure as many don't read shit at all. They only steal word phrases and ideas. Great poem queen..............

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