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"GS Skyscraper Soul Petition"
  by ...Da Fort...



Oh you just gotta feel the boogie in this joint...ahhhhhh...so0o00o0 sick!!
Aye Yo This is My 300th post...Thanks to all who got me here!!

:: A Petition to the Building Inspector ::

Should

…WE…

as a family
remodel
………abstractly
…molded …
….distinctive….
fantasy bricks??

misfit construction

….under….

discriminatory
metaphysical

…deconstruction

inspirational infrastructure
too diversely unique
must be
prejudicially….
……..fixed??

cement
needs to be
…..unnecessarily….
….emotionally….

remixed??

reality foundations

this
positive building

….IS….


adversely
advanced
…….for
simple hateful
….civilization…..

….a

monstrosity monument
full of categories

……infinite….. stories
…..lifelong ….accomplishments

a permitted
…political eyesore…

….perhaps

…angered…
sore eyes
need to

…rise….

to the enlightening
philosophical floors

….before ….

ignorant
war torn

…condemnation….

of this structural
spiritual
formation

…apprehensive…

to enter
the
feeling… good… epicenter

…..clearly…

haiku hesitant

this skyscraper
mausoleum
….houses
various ….
…..eclectic peaceful
humorous residents

gothic lithium
….harmless
lilith terrorists
they’re just in mourning…

but inspector
…check
our floor of acrostics

{{…Private XXX-Rated floor…}}

… Detour…

if you’re not 18
….then

I

suggest
you leave
this passionate
lustful floor
of erotics

…sometimes….

art ‘erected ‘
……there

could leave
you feeling
false love
or
broken hearted

now …

the….. basement
….is ….a
foreign language department
with
spoken word, rhymes & sonnets

it’s a plethora of prose…..

constructed
…..rock solid

each poem
introspectively
….polished

it’s the ghetto
…classically urbanized….

….no gentrification….
….no renovation….
….nothing commercialized…

that ignorance is admonished

…this building is built on the premise of free thoughts of minds…

So building inspector
:: Our Petition is ::

…why does the soul in the building have to be demolished…

..*Come on everybody it's time to build*...

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Date Submitted: Jul 08, 2008 (03:57 AM)
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  mariposa
07/31/08 (06:51 AM) 
love the metaphor... allows for a very positive view of our home... as well as positive outlook for its future... congrats on 300... but um... dont you have anything better to do??? lmao!!! just kidding... ya know i loves ya... (GETA LIFE! ) lmao!

  PoiZen
07/08/08 (03:11 PM) 
You is one creative mutha......hush my mouth.....I applaud and agree with the sentiments expressed here

  Soul Lyrikal
07/08/08 (01:40 PM) 
This joint needs to be passed around...inhale the negative & blow out peace! Brick by Brick build all back up!

  One
07/08/08 (12:54 PM) 
why this make me wanna clap my hands and wear a robe?...*joinin the choir....*chantin AMEN...lol

  Sum-Thyng Like...
07/08/08 (12:29 PM) 
Concept is MAGIC!!! message within the write was well needed Nicely done

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