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" GS-(((Crush)))"
  by Correnda a.k.a Renda



Can I put it on you is wat you here comin from niggaz mouths an also songs…
Dats why you turned my head wit dat poem keep ya clothes on
Blushin even pretendin you were talkin directly to me
Couldn’t turn away cuz 4 u my eyes were glued to the screen
When you said letz make magic made me feel like you were proposing a toast
Why am I trembling, understand I don’t get nervous 4 most
But this was different an different was you
But I could tell you had no clue
Dat you had a girl over here going wild
Slowly getting addicted to your style
Damn here I go again, gaining da feelings of a kid
Wasn’t nothing u said..not even nothing u did
I guess people kno what they like
An right now wat I feel is you
Don’t wanna tell u dis cuz you’ll be like wat did I do?
You ain’t do nothing boo
Nope nothing out of the ordinary
I juz gain feelins easy n dat part of me scares me
Cuz wat if da feelin is only on my end
Wat if u not feelin me an cant even pretend
Or wat if you got a girl
An I’ma distraction n yo world
But u didn’t treat me like a distraction
U were patient n your actions
But maybe dats your personality
Treatin a lady very kindly
Whatever it is all I can say is you’ve got my heart tight in a fist
Now if I closed my eyes…count to 5..you’d be my wish
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Date Submitted: May 05, 2007 (01:11 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/14/07 (01:35 AM)
Author: Mz. Gutta aka Hershey
Poem Title: Another GS Crush

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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  da realest in ...
05/02/08 (08:58 PM) 
hot write tenzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  Ms. Hollywood
08/15/07 (12:27 AM) 
ooh no.. not the gs crush.. that's was up i can dig that... good write... but let that brother know!

  Mz. Gutta aka ...
08/14/07 (01:25 AM) 
perfectly written, and an inspiration to a poem. good job girly! 10 stars all day

  SpitFire
08/13/07 (08:21 PM) 
I liked this poem. 10 starzz.

  Marvelo
08/13/07 (07:54 PM) 
this was well written. I think i've become a fan of your words their like magic.so deep and captivating that i can't stop reading until their done your very skilled when it comes to writing

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