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"GS'ers: Don't Beg...Let me Choose!!!"
  by A..Po...ETic..sTaR


**If this offends you...Oh Well**

I log on to GS, with 14 messages...
A smile goes across my face.
When I hit my inbox
I become IRATE!

"Yo can you check my writes"
Most of them say
Damn!
What am I the english teacher today!!!
Stop
Beggin for reads...
PLease!!
When I first joined...I was on that shit...
Realized I was beggin & Quit!
If I really like ...you know what I'll do?!
I'll subscribe to you
Like Blakk and KiKi TOO!!
Begging for Writes, Is like begging for change...
Naw I aint got it today!
Maybe tomorrow if you dont ask...
I might comment ya ass...
So take this as a lesson
And soon ya writes
I might be BLessing...
You probably was about to send that message...
Now your second guessing!!


LMAO
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Date Submitted: Jul 31, 2008 (10:37 PM)
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  angeleyes1
12/15/08 (08:43 PM) 
yes I hear you diva I think alot of us feel that way keep them coming much love always

  Dana Dane
11/12/08 (02:24 PM) 
Haha! You said it Diva!

  P03tIC@LLY SK!...
10/29/08 (10:58 PM) 
Hecks naw...but i can't front i do ask people to read my poetry but i do believe that there is a difference between asking for a favor and begging...see me i feel that im basically asking for a favor and like my mommy tells me on favor desrves another favor so i make sure that i return the favor..LOL...but thats my take on it but as for the poem i like it...i thought it was very well written and humorous...ten stars

  LyricallyDelic...
10/15/08 (08:38 AM) 
LMAO!! This line right here has me HOLLERIN "Damn! What am I the english teacher today!!!"

  LyricallyDamag...
09/11/08 (10:15 PM) 
LMAOO AMEN.. See I havent been on here for least 4 months maybe I donno lol I have never Pm anyone asking for reads.. so it angers me.. when My inbox is full Of liars who annoy constantly beggin and shiit saying i'll return the favor when they wont and if they do they say some messed up shiit like " oh this was nice.." DAMN huh.. Thanks for sharing this one.

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