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"Guess Who?"
  by ladiredd


You seen me once when i was young
but never again
use to think of me often
now thoughts are gone in the wind
Then one day we reunited
i knew you from the start
i was unfamiliar to you
cause its no longer in your heart
We instantly connected
but now that is thru
the last words i heard
"I feel like i know you"
Many years later
my life came to a hault
behind the wheel, a drunk driver
and you were at fault
Now you're curious
cause im familiar to your eye
Go ahead, guess who i am
this will be your last try

LET ME HELP YOU!

I belong to you
1/4 of your soul
the one you neglected and left in the cold
I know you were young
and really afraid
but life went on and you got older
a new family was raised
what is wrong
that you couldnt give me a place
that when you looked in my eyes
you couldnt see your own face

YOU STILL DONT KNOW...

Well my identity
will soon to be shown
the life you forgot, the life you took
is the child you chose not to take home


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Date Submitted: Oct 10, 2009 (07:35 PM)
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  slow boogie100...
10/27/09 (11:38 PM) 
ALMOST BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES...THIS VERY WELL CULD HAVE BEEN MY STORY...GREAT DROP..THIS IS MY FAV IT REALLY SHOWS YOUR RANGE AND IMAGINATION

  BabyGirl09
10/14/09 (11:23 PM) 
agreed with grim reaper

  Tuck
10/14/09 (12:25 AM) 
I felt this from top to bottom,in n out..creative flotivaty u got goin here

  aundra
10/13/09 (02:16 PM) 
this is a really good write. i like it. i find myself askn the same questions some time. this poem really touched me.

  mp
10/12/09 (04:50 PM) 
i feel da emotion from this u put the images in my head i like dis

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