GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...'s PREVIOUS POEM ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...'s NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
".Guiltless Precision."
  by ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...


Selective self introspective reflected perfected
Inner visions distilled wrongs spilled veins chilled

Ignoring prevalent past unforgiving decisions
Heartless speaking heartfelt polarity opposites

Professing perfection swearing complete absolution
Defiled diluted conscience rehabilitated instituted

::_____________________________________________::

.Lies/Living.
.
.Former/Friends.
.Present/Victims.
.
.Shady/Treatment.
.Distrust/Given.
.
.Shoveling/Dirt.
.Guiltless/Precision.

::_____________________________________________::

Killing people killing time murderous hands clockwise
Acknowledge the weak some watched a few survive

Remorseless detached cautious attacks premeditated
Assassinating characters riffs instantaneously created

Evidence repels minds clear no tears no shred of sorrow
Allies today acquaintances by night enemies tomorrow

::_____________________________________________::

.Lies/Living.
.
.Former/Friends.
.Present/Victims.
.
.Shady/Treatment.
.Distrust/Given.
.
.Shoveling/Dirt.
.Guiltless/Precision.

::_____________________________________________::

Done dirty deeds reasons hidden smeared facts truth twisted

“…The little bird that chirps is usually the foul feather that did it…”

Slyly skilled woven words needled evil liquid wicked quill
Hollow conscience sinister smile a spinster sickening thrills

Penned poisoned pleasure purposefully puncturing nerves
Observing friends fall guiltless precision arrowed words

::_____________________________________________::

.Lies/Living.
.
.Former/Friends.
.Present/Victims.
.
.Shady/Treatment.
.Distrust/Given.
.
.Shoveling/Dirt.
.Guiltless/Precision.

....Beware Shiesty People Dig Up Your Skeletons They Re-Bury Them With You...

© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Oct 02, 2008 (12:02 AM)
search icon
Viewed: 73 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (484 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 0 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Disoriented Di...
10/09/08 (12:16 AM) 
i read this bout now i break it down and felt it...Yeap...a brilliant reality we all need to be aware of!

  --->ROXIE<---
10/04/08 (09:54 AM) 
DAMN THAT LAST LINE!!! THAT SHIT IS SO FUCKIN TRUE...I ALSO LIKED TH EPART ABOUT THE BIRD WHO CHIRPED IS THE FOUL FEATHER THAT SAID IT....INTERESTING

  Blakfiya
10/02/08 (10:36 AM) 
Very insightful piece. Definitely some wise words contained therein, along with your talented pen doing what it does and that is...make you think.

  Soul Lyrikal
10/02/08 (01:21 AM) 
HHH, just took the words out my mouth, I was thinking the same thing...but hey some fear what they don't understand...speaking of fear, the BG, Music..Sick...on top the the message you conveyed so well and blunt, as you always do! Don't get me hype tonight, I gotz 2 go 2 bed!

  H.H. Holloway
10/02/08 (01:18 AM) 
I'm tripping because this had abundant points and no one has yet to comment on this piece--I mean, hell--I'm not even sure how to comment on this one--because it plays like an epitaph/death threat/and eulogy--of course I could be wrong--but as usual, you bring the brain food--fully cooked and enough to feed a mental ward

Page(s): 1 
key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...'s PREVIOUS POEM ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...'s NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy