Wow dis is tight,, reall professionally done i like how u finish u it nd i liek how u end each line wit d start of nxt,, dis poem goes hard rih here gud write
Wow what a friggin dope concept madam!! and damnnnnn the way you ended this as well. Damn i think all of gs has been friggin sleepin' on your pen in that i unfortunately include myself. Anyways this was nothing short of brilliant. - T.I.D.
wow this poem is truly original...i loved the flow and the enriching vocabulary that you used to truly make this a written, and penetrating masterpiece =)