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"Gypsy Spirits Wild"
  by getchamndrite


Individual rifts flow in and out of synch
the beating aligns
felt within spirit
carnal shouts explode
inhibitions release
due to and independent of inebriation
diversity creating unity
movement of the soul sent swirling through arms and legs
complete expression
freedom boundless
hips sway
the music that conjures
ever intertwining yet never conflicting
Zen moments for all
gypsy spirits wild
flowing skirts dash from Arial flames
innocence of child embraced and expressed
tempo shifts
cause unknown
fiery passion ignited
hands flying with purpose
kneeling
as if to pray, but to create
expressions of life
bass – lows
treble – highs
rhythm
cycles
cool air kisses my skin – blessing this time
creative pulse felt even in my pen
some unknown existent yet non-existent monarch silently brings the group to a halt
individual musical rants continue
as if searching for the next inspiring combination
indentions of the concrete surface press into knees of those who kneel
a sacrifice
joyfully made
trancelike

Interlude
Conversation
Slight biblical overtones
Progression or regression?
Humor nonetheless
His departure for sex with his wife

Music returns
Gaining momentum and volume
The enlightened one joins me
Without a word
Lays prostrate

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Date Submitted: Sep 11, 2008 (04:23 AM)
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  Lique
01/01/09 (10:02 PM) 
this was a pretty mellow write, I agree with "dawn" this would have to be the most poetic expression and description of the innocent flow of a gypsy dance/aura that could ever have been written

  IndiaNicole
12/31/08 (11:02 AM) 
beautifully written, love the emotion 10stars and a fav

  williesidney
10/12/08 (02:47 PM) 
Another good write and another ten stars.

  DownAzzNinja
10/07/08 (09:29 PM) 
Sound is so powerful, bladed or broad. It demands your attention like a child, yet stands with the strength of creativity abound. Is sound so material? Or can its soul be found in waves, even between intangible motions. Are we music to something larger? Chords of true fluid beings. Compilations divine. I believe I enjoy you! You are music as a constant!

  Dawn
09/22/08 (09:03 AM) 
love this write ma ma..the imagery..was really nice..it had a mellow flow to it..very calm and relaxing...one love

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